Thursday, 12 March 2015

My wonder writing

My goal for my wonder writng is descriptive words. This is how I've used them. The words in bold are the descriptive words.

Off to the park:
As I was having my delisous breakfast in the kitchen Mum asked Via and I if we would like to take Daisy he friendly dog to the park. We both said YES excitedly! But I had never gone to the park before EVER in my life.

Arriving at the park:
I sprinted in the gate of the park with Via and Daisy the friendly dog. But as I sprinted in I noticed  that these two women were staring at me then they pointed at my face and started cracking up laughing at me and how I looked.

Mum getting MAD:
When I saw them laughing at me Mum aggresavily stormed over to them and started screaming harsh words to them. I was so furious at Mum I dashed to a bush and hid with Daisy and Via.

The drive home:
As I jumped in the car I didn't say a word to Mum. When we arrived home I ran straight to my room and fell asleep with Daisy. Then I think to myself I don't care how I look I am who I am and that is how it is.

By Reia 

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