My writing goal is to use punctuation is the right places. So here is my proof that I have done that.
My career goal is to be an Animal Attendant because I love animals and I like to help them when they need it. The chance of me getting this job is average because not many people like doing it because they get too close to the animals and want to keep them when they leave. In this job you do lots of things such as looking after animals and cleaning up after them, cleaning lots of shelters,feeding and bathing them and a whole lot more!